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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-13 11:53 AM



Ice cream reminds me of you
The way there are so many flavors
That I want to taste and be indulged in
Haven't you a clue that Ice Cream reminds
me of you?
our lips sharing your ice cream cone
sharing our dreams of esctasy
so that's why I guess ice cream reminds me
of you
I love my sweets can't resist
but this I'll have to simply admit
that I can sinfully indulge in you
for you see your calorie free and
that my man is a woman's dream
You remind me of my favorite cake
with lots of sugar because
babe your as sweet as a lovers
delight and this is just an appetizer
for starts so I guess you know
your the lovers rhapsody and I plan
on devulging in your million delights
on this moon filled lovers night

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-13 01:38 PM


I have no idea how this one made it way back to the second page untouched,but I will gladly take a taste of something this sweet anytime.  You have penned a sheer delight with this one my friend.
Rosebud1229
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North Carolina
2 posted 2000-10-13 02:17 PM


thank you Mark your always so kind , I can't help it I do love sweets! lol
Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07
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South Carolina
3 posted 2000-10-13 03:59 PM


Absolutely charming, Rosebud...yes, sweet indeed!

Robert Joseph

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-10-13 04:04 PM


Now you have me thinking of that shaved ice delight me and a friend shared just the other day...with lots of sweet bean sauce and fresh fruits and a cherry on the top...a little sweet...delicious...almost as desirable as a kiss...James
Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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5 posted 2000-10-14 12:31 PM


thanks so much Robert and James, sweets are even better when you share them, not to mention half the calories hehe..
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