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No Reason to Anymore |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
No Reason to Anymore < !signature--> "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." Chagrall [This message has been edited by onceuponatime (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Once~ Welcome!  This is painful and so sad. You wrote these feelings so well....enjoy your stay here. -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a very touching entrance into the Forum! Well done, and welcome to Passions! Looking forward to more of this! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OnceUponATime~ Welcome to Passions. You'll find lots of friendship's in-the-making here. Hope you'll take the time to read and enjoy the writings of the many talented poets here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
you write your feelings well, anyone who has been this sad knows just what you write of...welcome and hope you find your sunshine again...am looking for some light in my life as well..... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions, your imagery is amazing, I look forward to reading more! Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah yes I know this feeling well...welcome to our world |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
OnceUponATime... Firstly, I extend a warm welcome2U Secondly, thank you for sharing your poetry this is a good read! Coco |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
SEA-thank you for your welcome I am sure it will be a comforting stay. once... < !signature--> "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." Chagrall [This message has been edited by onceuponatime (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
onceuponatime- Welcome to Passions! Wonderful entrance you've made here. I look forward to reading lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Once.... welcome *again* here to PIP, I like to think I've felt this before...so damned numbed. |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
serenity-I am sure you will get your "fill" of me and my words before too long  once... "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
Marge Tindal- thank you I have been here awhile reading and yes they are all very talented poets ...once "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing..James |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
jinxed-thank you...some day my "light" will come...oh darn that's "prince" isn't it...oh well... ...once "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I think it's very nice, and to see you too. (lucky) dale Writing, isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
Irish Rose- imagery is only in the mind's eye...and onceuponatime I was someone else but have taken on a new image ...once "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
add my welcome to the list ... new/old poet. this poetry has a familiarity about it... HMMMMM??? anyway....enjoyed this sad but lovely melancholy piece. well written take care jm |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
Paula Finn- thank you for the welcome, it's not the greatest feeling to have but it's inevitable at the moment and brings me to my sad state of ...once upon a time...when thoughts were happier "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
Just a thought.....If you respond to everyone who has replied to you all at once in one comment, rather than responding to each individual person who comments to your poetry in a separate reply, you will avoid bringing your post repeatedly up to the top of the forum, thereby, inadvertantly and without purposely doing so, dismissing other poets who have posted and want their work to be read. Just a thought and since you are new here, as am I, I think, then I thought you might be interested in hearing these comments. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for posting it. Yes, sometimes there is no rhyme, no reason, or so it seems... but underneath, there always is and that is the meaning that should be searched for, according at least to the humble wisdom of some myth like Athena. May all truths become apparent to you and relevant and may you discover that my words here were in no way negative, but instead, filled with the power of the forums. Peace. Worship only truth & peace like Zeus, my father, also known as Jupiter- respect his magic breastplate trimmed w/snakes, shaken by thunder |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
Coco- I appreciate your welcome and thank you for stopping to read and comment ...once "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
You didn't read my comment??? hmmmm..... well, Please please PLEASE do NOT respond to it in order to kick your post back up top because Wisdom dictates this isn't a good idea.... When you responded to Coco, you still have FIVE OR SIX MORE people to respond to... o n e a t a t i m e... so you can continually bump your poem up top while OTHER PEOPLE... (hmmmmm.... YESSSS!!!! there are other poets here).... watch their posts silently and quietly slip to page 2, 3, 4 and beyond within hours No, I am not a Moderator. But Moderate this..... when several people have responded to you, DO NOT respond to EACH individually because it isn't fair to the rest who are trying to get read. Read my Wisdom. I am Athena. Thank you.... and no need to respond to me. Worship only truth & peace like Zeus, my father, also known as Jupiter- respect his magic breastplate trimmed w/snakes, shaken by thunder |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Wisdom also dictates that while some suggestions may be good ideas, the manner they are presented in is just as important as the message they convey. One of the cornerstones of Passions is the POLITE interaction of our members. Polite interaction does not include berating another member. Suggestions are wonderful, and something which we can use to help our newer members "learn the ropes." Your suggestion, Athena, is a good one. The manner it was presented in however doesn't quite fit within the spirit of Passions. Read my wisdom, I am Christopher. And I AM a moderator. |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
< !signature-->"In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall [This message has been edited by onceuponatime (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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onceuponatime Junior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 13east coast |
!signature--> "In our life there is a single color, as on an artist`s palette, which provides the meaning of life and art. It is the color of love." M Chagrall [This message has been edited by onceuponatime (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
I apologize for the rude manner I presented my complaint. I did compliment your poem and made comments about the topic and the way you presented the poem, however, in my first comment. I guess sometimes I'm not all a Goddess is cracked up to be. I'm only a myth, after all. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
My title was perfect wasn't it, Athena No Reason to Anymore...to stay here and post... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I hope you change your mind, Maureen. You would certainly be missed around here. Sometimes things are said, tempers flare, here, just as in our private lives. I didn't add my comments to this earlier, as a moderator, because I think Christopher spoke for the rest of us. I think he handled the situation well and caused the original situation to turn around. Please take a few days to think things over. Decisions made when we are upset are not always our best decisions. Please feel free to contact me or one of the other Moderators whenever you feel that there is a problem of any kind. One of us is usually around at any given time. Also, if you want a poem locked or deleted, you must email one of the Moderators of that particular forum. A Moderator from another forum cannot do these funtions, they can only do it in their designated forums. That your poem was not locked does not mean that your request was not honored...it may just mean that one of the Moderators who can do that is not online at the moment. Again, I hope you reconsider. I hope to read more from you in the future, here at Passions. Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
.............. [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
We write poetry. We're not threads of anger, hurt, WE ARE POETRY. I simply say we move it to a personal e-mail, write, leave if we wish but respect one another's viewpoints and make poetry the main theme and remember that Passions has dignity and class. That's why I'm here and I hope that's why others are also. < !signature--> Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
Father Zeus, HELP ME!!! OK, HOW'S THIS? I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I understand your hurt, Maureen. It's also easy to think that no one cares if an email is not replied to in a timely manner. We aren't on line all the time, ourselves. Sometimes I am not on line for a day or two in a row, depending on how badly I was beaten up at work on a particular day. The best way to reach one of the Moderators of a particular forum is to email the 'General Alert' option. Then all the Moderators of that forum as well as Ron will receive it at the same time and whoever happens to be on line will be able to address any problem immediately. No one of us can be on 24/7. Again, I hope you reconsider your decision. I would miss your ~softsmiles~ and ~softhugs~ Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Mmoonchild..it looks like i have been doing something wrong too..now im afraid to respond to anyone incase someone is offended..i thought it was more courtesy to respond to each individually and give the people who missed my poem a chance to read it too...You will be missed by me if you leave..i know I let someone get to me in another forum and i wish i could of just ignored them..I hope your disagreement with just one person does not make us all suffer from your absence my good friend..HUGS.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen, (onceuponatime), Another excellent writing by you. As far as the comments I have just read. Please answer any replies as you wish. One at a time, or all at once. I know that when I receive a single reply, it just seems to me to be more personal. But I must add, that in a grouping they are also meaningful to me. Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Onceuponatime as William Bendex used to say "What a Revolting Development this Is". The sad part of this is you have lots of beautiful poetry to share and if we could put this behind us the moderators will work out any problems...I have rairly seen this forum used in a negative way where other poets have felt as if they must act as moderators and straighten out other poets...but I have seen it before...I hope this is the end of that...take care of yourself Poet..softly...James |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
I am not a moderator. I want no control. I am just a fallen Goddess, fallen in a hole. A Goddess, yes, can surely err, just like a human being. Life sometimes just isn't fair; apologies are spoken. And that's all that you can ask, sincerity's no token. Christ said when a man approaches asking for forgiving, forgive him nine times ninety-nine and then just go on living. Buddha said let's live in peace while contemplating nature, and no matter what you say, there never is erasure. Words are spoken, sometimes yes, and words are not deleted. Sorry is word I said repeatedly repeated. *shrug* |
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