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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Resist the temptation your heart silently echoes Eventually feelings change from times long ago Faint memories continue to sway through your mind Love and adoration a vision once led you blind Expectations of tomorrow just getting through the night Continued ignorance shall tarnish in goodtime Take off the mask and let your feelings show In dreams you continue to love safe from the harm Obstacles of hurt and words cutting sharp Not what it seemed you naievly thought Senseless heartache a reflection that fades in time  Coco |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely acrostic...hey where you been? Nice to see you again. So let my feelings show huh? Well I thought I was good at that already. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am glad that i came in and read this one, love and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This piece has such a tone of resigned melancholy, Coco...(or maybe it's just my hormones? LOL) naw, loved the acrostic, well written, m'friend! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful acrostic~ and my question was asked already...where ya been?? beautiful work you got here girlie. very nice. take care and stop in some more soon. love ya, amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ amazing acrostic! Quite beautiful. -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My poet friends It's so sweet of all of you to stop by and read this lil rhyme and your comments and thoughts are always appreciated... As for where I've been... actually rite here I'm just reading all the eloquent poetry everyone shares, there's so many new friends here nowadays to acquaint myself with in my nightly reading and you know me I get swept away in your verses many a times... Smiles2U my friends and have a great Friday Coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I have not written an acrostic in a long time..maybe i will one of these days..nicely written Coco.. enjoyed your gift of words~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ This is an exquisite acrostic rhyme. Not easy to do and you did it with flair and style ! Very, very nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Nicely done Coco ... my acrostics always sound so contrived, but this has a very natural flow ... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Coco...this is just wonderful...one thought just flowing right to the next...very lovely |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Coco, One of these days I'm going to work up the courage to do a poem in this style and format, I love yours so much. < !signature--> Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Beautifully written. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
COCO... its SO GREAT to have a post of yours to feast upon.. and youve given my eyes a sweet read with this treat.. wonderful ryhme and cadence... thank you for always being such a consistant reader of my work your love of poetry is always evident ... and this acrostic is lovely. later-sweet-reply-gator jm |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful..I think this is becoming quite the theme lately here at Passions. Seems everyone is reflecting in some way or another. Enjoyed this! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Coco, I enjoyed reading this piece, it was like a breath of fresh air! Robert Joseph |
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