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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-10-11 09:57 PM



Dancing cheek to cheek
Wrapped in your arms
My knees feel weak
This feeling’s so good

Floating somewhere outside the crowd
Almost vertigo vision of you
Everything else a blur
I think my heart skipped a beat

I never want this moment to end
But the music draws to a close
And you draw your lips to mine
Ill treasure this moment forever


Keith Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-10-11 10:04 PM


Keith*
This is the second dancing poem I've had the
pleasure of reading today...what a beautiful
memory you have to hold onto, thank you for
sharing it, I enjoyed it very much~

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-10-11 11:51 PM


Keith there's so much passion shared in a slow dance and you've wrote it so cleverly here.
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-10-12 01:40 AM


Keith~ this made me think of High school dances and how sweet those can be....very nice.   -SEA
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-10-13 02:51 AM


Keith...what a beautiful dance...mmmm may I have the next?
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-10-13 12:20 PM


Ok. . .now I'm ready to go dancing. . .  

Excellent my friend. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Waverly917
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
6 posted 2000-10-13 03:39 PM


hmmmm...I'm going to have to have a dance this weekend.  Will you come?       

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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