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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Floating in this dreamlike state Far away from where I am No cares for this world Its only you and me Your touch feels almost real Your sent is almost tangible Here within my mind You’re not so far from me You’re right here next to me I can hear you breathing Thought it be not really real My mind cares not, in its daydreaming Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
DK, sometimes daydreaming is the best past time there is. It amazing what you can make seem real. Loved the poem. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sometimes it doesn't matter how or when we get there...only that we DO! Great work~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful daydream.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Keith...you just keep right on dreaming as long as those dreams keep making such lovely poems |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Keith- Dreams are real to the one who is dreaming. I love your poetry. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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