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vlraynes
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0 posted 2000-10-10 06:21 PM





ghosts and goblins
black cats too
witches stirring
up a brew

jack-o-lanterns
in each window
smiling with an
eerie glow

up and down the
moon-lit streets
tricksters roam
in search of treats

candy, cookies,
apples and more-
be sure to knock on
every door

when little bodies
start to tire
want for goodies
will inspire

till mom says
'time to go to bed'
and happy dreams
fill tiny heads


-vlraynes







[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-10-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-10 07:18 PM


Vlraynes~ this is SO CUTE!!   -SEA

                

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2 posted 2000-10-10 08:12 PM


i agree with Sea..very cute..
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3 posted 2000-10-10 08:13 PM


Vicky~

TREAT for sure !

I love Halloween poems !
So adorable is this one.

I like your style, gal !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2000-10-10 08:24 PM


Vicky,

What a wonderful poem!!  This was too cute.  I can see them all now!!  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

vlraynes
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5 posted 2000-10-11 05:03 PM



SEA-
   thanks so much for reading.
   glad you enjoyed.  

Victoria-
   thank you.  
   glad you like.  

Marge-
   hi friend!  so glad you liked
   this one.     thanks so much
   for the enthusiastic reply.  
   you have a pretty awesome style
   yourself.            
   ((((((((HUGS)))))))))

Lone Wolf-
   thanks so much for reading.  
   so glad you enjoyed it.    

THANKS AGAIN EVERYBODY!!
      -vicky


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"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-11-2000).]

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-10-14 03:01 AM


"you uh......PUNKIN DOG!"  as joie would say in her best 2 yr old magic wand waving trick...and just what the heck is a punkin dog anyway....rofl!!

this is too cute tricks..and i love your punkin too    

hugs, me


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7 posted 2000-10-14 04:41 AM


Hee hee, this is so adorable. Vlraynes where did you get that picture? I love it!

~ Beth

vlraynes
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8 posted 2000-10-14 09:32 PM



dg-
   ROFL...PUNKIN DOG!  
   she's just too cute.  
   i'm really glad you like this.  
   ((((((((HUGS))))))))

Beth-
   thanks so much for reading...glad
   you enjoyed this.  

   the website where i found this graphic is
   www.luckyblackcat.com
   glad you like it.  

thanks again guys,
            -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


Butterflies_dont_cry
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9 posted 2000-10-14 09:35 PM


Enjoyed this one very much...bedtime on
Halloween is the best...when the kids go to
bed I get to pick my favorites out of their
trick or treat bags....lol   Great writing~

vlraynes
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10 posted 2000-10-16 03:37 AM



Butterflies_dont_cry-
   lol...i don't have any children of my
   own, so can i come over and share some
   of your candy? rofl...   

   thanks so much for reading.  
   glad you enjoyed.  

((((((HUGS))))))
       -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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11 posted 2000-10-16 07:39 PM


Vicky, this is soooo cute! Delightful!

Denise

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12 posted 2000-10-17 09:39 PM




So you like the visions of raiding the loot do ya my friend?    Wonderful read for the upcoming holiday and I didn't even have to have my flashlight to walk my eyes across this one..LOL....""I am not scared...there are no such things as ghosts....it is just my imagination"" {whispering below my breath}

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13 posted 2000-10-17 11:09 PM


Cute piece!
Halloween is a great time of the year.


vlraynes
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14 posted 2000-10-18 06:30 PM



Denise-
   thanks so much.
   glad you enjoyed this.  

Mark-
   yes, my friend...that loot sounds pretty
   good to me.   ...and don't worry, i'll
   protect you from those bad ol' ghosts.  
   thanks for the kind words ... again you've
   made me smile.    (((((HUGS)))))

Insect-
   thanks so much for the colorful reply.
   glad you enjoyed this.  

thanks again all,
      -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mark Bohannan
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15 posted 2000-10-18 06:52 PM


Promise???
vlraynes
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16 posted 2000-10-19 01:04 PM



Mark-
   would i lie to you?  
   you bet your boots...cowboy boots
   of course...i won't let those
   ghosts bother you one bit.  
   now, about that loot...lol.  
  
   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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17 posted 2000-10-19 01:09 PM


Cute!

Elizabeth


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18 posted 2000-10-19 03:00 PM


Such a sweet treat
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19 posted 2000-10-19 03:04 PM


This just sings "twick or tweet" vl....Love it!!! Bonnie
vlraynes
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20 posted 2000-10-19 11:19 PM



Elizabeth-
   thanks for reading.
   glad you like.  

Paula-
   thanks for the 'sweet' reply.
   glad you enjoyed this.  

Bonnie-
   lol...'twick or tweet'.  
   so glad you enjoyed this one.  
   thanks for reading.  

thanks all,
      -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



wayoutwalt
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21 posted 2000-10-19 11:24 PM


vick your the pick
of the black cat litter
(titter titter)

vlraynes
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22 posted 2000-10-20 05:37 PM



Walt-
  lol...thanks for the witty reply.
  really glad you enjoyed.  

  -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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