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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Kansas flatline winds dry, crackling, flying dust, leaves whisk my love to me Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
This is what happens when you sleep, a new forum opens and you miss everything. Well Karilea congradulations on having the first poem in the new forum and if I type fast enough I might even be the first reply. I am letting out a big sigh here wouldn't it be great if the winds could carry us to loved ones who live far away. I am going Tornado watching and seeing if I can get one heading towards Australia. Beautiful poem...no place like home, love those ruby slippers.  "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
riding winds of change swirling mass of emotion rest within your heart Kansas winds so dry in the heart as dust in eye blinks for tomorrow |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Winds in Kansas? who'd of thought... *smile* nicely written. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sunshine!! You can even make Kansas seem beautiful and mystical with your words!! I am STILL your #1 fan!!!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..sounds a little like my state..think I'll go outside and wait on a gust! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Brian...and thanks... Mark, your additions make a lovely trilogy... Mike, yup...hey, I KNOW where you're from!!!... Sunny1 - you'll head my fan club, right? LOL... Marcy, I know, I know...!!! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
When poetry knocks I leave my door wide open Letting beauty in ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Through colored glases The dust turns a lovely hue Why not try this view? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Sunshine. . . This just flows so well. . . and a great opening to #10. . . Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I enjoyed this.......the ending was so perfect. Great write. Sometimes......winds do blow in the darndest things....one never knows....... Jenn E |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Mr. Yeats, yet another Haiku from you...I must have done something very right today...thank you!... Sy, I've been accused of wearing several shades of rose colored glasses in my past...there are times we do need to take them off...[don't worry, they'll go back on soon!]...thank you! Sven, kind words indeed...it was a BLAST opening up the Forums this morning and finding 10 all to my lonesome... Jenn, indeed, one never knows what the winds will blow in...good fortunes, whispers...dust... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Just as the cream rises to the top - so should this beauty ! LOVED IT ... Wind on Kansas plains Transports Dorothy to OZ Oh no ! Where's Toto ? A Sunday morning grin coming your way !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh this is lovely, really lovely. I'll catch me a dream, hook myself to a cloud and then let those winds carry me off.  Marsha |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge,...Dor's still wearing those tacky shoes and I'm ready to come home...have food ready...TOTO Marsha, I'll send a tornado you're way, make sure your lasso is ready, and hold on tight... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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