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“I Quite Possibly Might Be” (challenge)
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“I Quite Possibly Might Be” (challenge) |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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I am... I am... what? I am all. I am nothing. I am new, yet decidedly old. I am me. Most certainly I am myself. My mother say’s I am special. I have been you. And I have been them. I’ve been all been that one could be. But I have given it up, Just to be me. (I never joined the army) I am human. I am sin. I am forgiveness. I am animalistic. I am damnation, yet I hold salvation. I am not you. I am not them. I am a figment of your imagination. < !signature--> understanding is misunderstood [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very deep! Challenge met!! But if you're a figment of my imagination, how can I read this?  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Effigy, Great to meet you. What a powerful poem. netswan |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very enigmatic.  Glad you decided to meet this challenge. Very well done. Alicat |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I have been you. And I have been them. I’ve been all been that one could be. But I have given it up, Just to be me. (I never joined the army) I am human. I am sin. I am forgiveness. I am animalistic. I am damnation, yet I hold salvation. I am not you. I am not them. I am a figment of your imagination ------------ very deep indeed... very interesting too... great job on this. enjoyed the read. ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Good job. You met this challenge very well. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whoa--hello! This is great! Deep and thoughtful with the right touch of wit! Thank you much. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
thanks to every one who has responded, I very glad that you all liked it. I'm glad that I could meet the challenge. understanding is misunderstood |
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