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AliciaRose New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 8 |
I AM- (challenge met by AliciaRose) I am a girl who likes to write poetry and wants to skate. I wonder how to talk Spanish. I hear aliens calling me from outer space. I see a purple and white bear. I want to ice skate. I am a girl who likes to write poetry and wants to skate. I pretend to be a pokemon. I feel excited when I think of skating. I touch an Easter rabbit. I worry that my friend might get hurt. I cry when someone tells my secrets. I am a girl who likes to write poetry and wants to skate. I understand that sometimes I can't go everywhere I want to go. I say I trust in God. I dream about a purple and green alien. I try to win a game I want to win. I hope that I can take ice skating lessons soon. I am a girl who likes to write poetry and wants to skate. by AliciaRose peri, age 7-1/2 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is PERFECT and precious... I LOVE the sweet innocence of this... wonderful writing Alicia Rose... you are a poet of grace like your mom! great job here sweetie... go for your dreams!! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I take it you really wanna ice skate..... *smiles* Alicia, this was too cute for words...and yes, you do take after your mom in your sensitivity and affection. I really need to read more poetry written by children from their unique perspective. Alicat, 29-1/2 |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is precious and perfect, Alicia! What a lovely poem you have written here! Not only have you risen to the challenge but you have succeeded with flying colours! Go get 'em girl!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Alicia - you are simply adorable, you know that? I think your mom should start marketing "Alicia dolls" - she'd make a fortune. Michael |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This was the sweetest challenge I have read. Thankyou for letting us get to know you better. I think your going to be an excellent skater Alicia. Marilyn 33 and no halves..lol |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Alicia My every poem i read of yours leaves me with this huge smile on my face. Sweetie you have a true talent in poetry, i truly believe that! i also think you are going to be a fine ice skater. So reach for your dreams and touch the stars! And always, no matter what believe in you. You are too precious for words! love ya, amy < !signature--> I just turned 23! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Alicia. I am glad Mom convinced you to write this, you did a fabulous job like I knew you would. I think we should all go ice skating the next time I come over. You are a precious little girl and you write so well. ~Hugs~ to you my sweet angel. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well, AliciaRose, what a wonderful poem you have written--- Oh, Skating is such fun! I am so glad you have come in and shared with us. netswan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You really know who you are! You did a good job on this challenge - I hope you get to learn to skate - I hope you don't get too many bumps when you do. I look forward to your next poem!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I see you have inherited your mother's talent for writing such beautiful heartfelt verse. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Oh, how precious and amazing to see this challenge met by a young girl who I can see writes very well. What a beautiful name you have also. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This one is just as wonderful as the rest - I think you're as good as your mom... and I hear that you like to fly kites too.. That's a good thing - because there's no ice in May...  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alicia, you seem to have a thing with aliens...hehe...and for writing beautiful poetry. This is so refreshing and pure, it is priceless and so are you! |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
heh, cute definately applies on this one, well done Alicia Mistikman- 17-1/2 |
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