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Perfectly Undone Rainbow
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Perfectly Undone Rainbow |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Perfectly Undone Rainbow I’ve been waiting across this long day as the keys glare their silent letters waiting for delicate blue eggs with thin transparent shells to open some tender thought I can hear this ticking slowly savoring time drain and have simmering fragrance around me for reminiscence The bullion bubbles cascading with memory but this draught still seethes with hungering So I press an asterisk and see how an eight is so conclusive and perfect circling into itself and I think that time must be like that with no beginning to teach it how to end a bubble has exploded somewhere so quiet and absolute from child-touched treasure to a perfectly undone rainbow Where does this matter display its intent and grace my alphabet with a period? [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ *8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8* 'waiting for delicate blue eggs with thin transparent shells to open some tender thought' *8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8*8* And so it did.  Even your writer's interlude is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Martie, This is so full of wonderful lines I don't know which one to pick so The hole thing is so great, you write well for not knowing what to write, thank you for sharing this im glad I did not miss it. Cerenity |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Martie! Gosh, what a poet! Even your writer's interlude is a lovely song to my ears! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How absolutely lovely!!! Imagine writing this while staring at your keyboard! You amaze me!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"and I think that time must be like that with no beginning to teach it how to end" Martie, where do these wonderful thoughts of yours come from? There is so much originality in every one of your poems. That's why I'm addicted to them - a new "high" every time Love you Liz |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Forget the "8"'s, Martie. When I want to think of you, I'll fill the page with "10"'s in tribute to you and your wonderful poetry.  |
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