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If I Could Paint The World
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If I Could Paint The World |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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If I Could Paint The World A splash of blue I’d through to the wind, and watch it take flight, across the sky it would go to meet the morning light. The greens I’ve picked from dark to light, tossing here and there, to make the trees and shrubs twirl in delight. Pinks and reds all shades do I use to fill the hearts of people every were, who does not enjoy the melody that these colors bring to the souls plight. The sun does shine with its light so bright, but not quiet enough yellow for me, so I will sweep the land with daisies sunflowers and daffodils. We still need more color to fill the hearts that just stay in despair so how about some purple and some umber and maybe a little splash of white to let them know that their hearts desires can come true. To top of this paining of mine I will add the secret touch of life’s pleasures and place the birds and bees just so in hopes to see a smile from all of you to let you know just how much I care. You see, your day can be any thing you want it to be, all it takes is a little paint some imagination and a heart to fill in the beauty of life’s dreams. By, Cerenity |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Cerenity, This is quite lovely, actually better than lovely, it's heart-felt and beautiful, nice job I love it.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Here, you paint your heart and it is a rainbow Liz |
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killer222 Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 48Northolt,Middlesex,England |
The world suddenly seems more colourful after reading this. I think there are some bits of black and grey you've missed  "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!" Killer222 :) |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Cerenity! U're really amazing! You're so clear in the portrayal of the world that I feel confident now of having a world like that. (((((((((hugs)))))))))))))))) A_L |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Thank you everyone for your the kind replys. Cerenity |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I was reading other poetry,but I thought,I have to reply this Because it's beautiful poem and I love it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting write! |
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