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Open Poetry #7
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Go0fYdUcK
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 28
CA

0 posted 2000-04-26 08:17 PM


She loves him so much it aches
But those feelings,
She cannot reveal

She loves him so much it hurts
Even with the help from time,
She won't ever be healed

She loves him so much it makes her wonder
If those feelings
Could change their friendship forever

She loves him so much it makes her cry
Knowing her affections for him
Won't ever die

She loves him so much it makes her smile
Realizing that
She'll have him for a while

She loves him so much it makes her comprehend
That she is in love
With her best friend...


 *KhAnH-eLySe*

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Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-04-27 10:40 PM


I was searching through the lists, and I found your poem.  The title caught me, because it was just a date, and I got curious.  That was a wonderful poem.  I enjoyed it very much.  I more than most know what that feeling is like.  Your poem described my past perfectly.  Thanks for sharing your talent.

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*



netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-04-27 11:13 PM


Powerful love, Goofy.


netswan

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