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lucky
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0 posted 2000-04-26 05:25 PM


yep..!
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Martie
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1 posted 2000-04-26 06:05 PM


Wow!  Lucky, you are such a word weaver of mood.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-04-26 06:25 PM




I was reading this aloud and had to stop and gasp for air once in a while. Lucky, I hope you don't do too many poetry readings! hehe
But what a pleasure. I wasn't sure where this was going to go and it soared at the end!
Yes, Martie, a weaver of word and a weaver of phrase and a weaver of thought.
Liz

doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-04-26 08:31 PM


This, sir, is one damn fine piece of writing! Excellent lines in here. Thank you for the read.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-04-27 06:57 AM


Lucky~
A morsel of delight.
You are just the master chef of poetry.
Serving up a delicious entree.
Beautifully done, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaleidoscope
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since 2000-01-10
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5 posted 2000-04-27 06:43 PM


This is an elegant and captivating work of art.  Very unusual, and well-crafted.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2000-04-27 09:32 PM


Oh, no poem about a hoot owl can be bad   I loved this one lucky, it left me breathless and wanting for more  
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