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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 2000-04-25 09:19 AM


Come back alone ranger
and bring me
some meaning.

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brandondinsmore
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1 posted 2000-04-25 09:23 AM


you know...it's about the writing losing its meaning (so-called) and the ordeal that it conjures...
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-04-25 09:40 AM


i get it....
or it could even be taken as how we are effected when our inspiration/muse leaves us.
good thoughts in this...
I bet you write Haikus?(this one reminded me of their style)
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



brandondinsmore
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3 posted 2000-04-25 12:45 PM


janet marie, i like you.  you are a great thinker!  actually, i wrote one about my muse...i'll post it.

i don't write haikus yet, but am, this very day, studying up on them...you also are a great writer, in case you didn't know.

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