»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
She blew me a kiss
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
She blew me a kiss |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
She blew me a kiss She showed me a measure of paradise. A ration of creation in rondeau. For only my eyes and twice to suffice. In adulation, only lovers know. I took her hand into fantasies grand And wondered in the shadows undertoe. Fell in love with the colors of this land And walked on the edge of a rainbow. It raked every emotion that I knew, Stirred every feeling to the edge of quake. Brought day and night into rendezvous. And swept me into the realm of awake. I'd been offered something beyond my belief. A souls invitation an open door. From a life time reef of secluded grief, To a bid of love of evermore. I reached out my soul to this angels invite, But she had to leave on the afternoon flight. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
This is a very well written piece. I can only hope there is another rendezvous in store. For you and for us....lol Jeffrey |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey, You and me both, thank you for the nice comment. |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ain't that the way it happens, Sy!? Maybe that's why they call them angels...they're always flying somewhere. More than once I've said goodbye to a first class girl in an economy seat.....good writing here  |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, great poem as always, I hope that there is another rendezvous in store for you too. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) If there is only to be one moment then that moment will last a lifetime in memory...**sigh** a beautiful poem may you rendezvous again quite soon for it creates breath taking works to behold.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Magically beautiful!  |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It raked every emotion that I knew, Stirred every feeling to the edge of quake. Brought day and night into rendezvous. And swept me into the realm of awake. I'd been offered something beyond my belief. A souls invitation an open door. From a life time reef of secluded grief, To a bid of love of evermore. ----------------- WOW Sy this is SO emotionally deep and well expressed...I love when you write like this. this poem is beautiful!!! take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
||
|
pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Loved it; especially the ending. |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So hard it is when dove flies in And leaves again with passing wind Perhaps some day a rondez vous Will bring her flying back to you I wish for you a rainbow's end And lots of happiness, my friend Keep up the wonderful poetry Liz |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How you take me along on your flights-of-fantasy. Can I book a round-trip ticket? Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful writing, Sy! |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, I just love what you can do with a verb. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends that wrote above, You have my heart, you have my love. I thank you all a million times, You've rung my bell a million chimes. Sy |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darn work, darn responsibility keeping me from beautiful poetry - Sy, you've done rung my chime, may the last ding-dong be mine! |
||
|
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Beautifully bittersweet |
||
|
mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I do love how your poems flow~ This is great~ Marie~ |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...thats why I always have my phone number ready. It doesn't pay off too much anyway. I guess some people only come into your life for brief moments of enjoyment and as you say they take the afternoon flight out of our lives. James |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You got it. *L* Beki, thank you so much. Jmlee, That's true, thanks for the read and comment. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
