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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 2000-04-24 07:14 PM


The Other

As flowers in a ripe bloom,
She will open herself to
The pain and sorrow
And viruses and diseases
That this world offers;
And all of those small things
Like a cool breath or a whispered
Word and the great things like
A long embrace or with conjunction,
Loveā€¦
And in this light we will be equals
Left by ourselves to stroll through
The days and nights of our love,
Our light.
She will come, wantingly, to my
Words, gestures, movements, and
The depth of those, and how
Far-reaching inside of her I get,
And beg of me, presence
And love,
And we will unify our twosome
And fall into true love.
I love you who I do not know.


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brandondinsmore
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1 posted 2000-04-24 07:31 PM


Yea...I don't thik too much of this one either...No wait...I do.
brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
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2 posted 2000-04-24 07:32 PM


Yea...I don't think too much of this one either...No wait...I do.
brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
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3 posted 2000-04-24 08:05 PM


Hmmm...

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-04-24 08:15 PM


Brandon, this was lovely and romantic,
My favorite line was...
And we will unify our twosome
And fall into true love.
I love you who I do not know

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-24-2000).]

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