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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-04-17 02:40 PM


Passions Haiku

Passion’s loving place,
in Passion life is found, new
passions feelings true



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-04-17 04:59 PM


so much wisdom in so few words...
very nice, very true
perfect.
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



INclan
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2 posted 2000-04-17 05:16 PM


Sunshine,

A passionate offering....lol.  Just teasing a little.  Good Haiku.

INclan

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3 posted 2000-04-17 09:20 PM


Hey, girl !
You got it !
Yeah ...  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-17 09:33 PM


This is lovely, Sunshine!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-04-18 08:55 AM


Thank you everyone - I am apparently INclan and Marge's new "student..."

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-04-18 09:33 AM


So true..so true  
Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-04-18 09:41 AM


Thanks, Hoot!
Pepper
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8 posted 2000-04-18 09:42 AM


True, indeed .....
Great job, Sun ....  

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9 posted 2000-04-18 09:44 AM


Pepper, our little upper...thank you!
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