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rene
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0 posted 2000-04-24 04:08 PM



the dog
s         a         t            

on the mat
(i feel cold)

© Copyright 2000 rene - All Rights Reserved
rene
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since 2000-04-24
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1 posted 2000-04-24 04:44 PM


oh the light fantastic, you truly are a genius rene how could i ever compare to you?
rene
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2 posted 2000-04-24 04:45 PM


well you know rene i've seen some of your stuff around too and i actually am quite a big fan of yours.
rene
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3 posted 2000-04-24 04:46 PM


really? (gasp)
rene
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4 posted 2000-04-24 04:47 PM


No I was lying, you couldn't write your name in the snow you dumb schmuck
rene
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5 posted 2000-04-24 04:48 PM


Oh how could you, i lay my heart bare on the table and you pour syrup over it ad beefy gravy and serve it to the very hounds that lick their own nether reginials
rene
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6 posted 2000-04-24 04:49 PM


Ahh quit ya yappin or i'll have to slap ya myself ya hear?
rene
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7 posted 2000-04-24 04:50 PM


yes sir, i, i'm very sorry i don't know what came over me. i am a worm, i am scum i am nothing
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