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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Love Tunnel ~~~  Climb aboard buckle up you may not like the ride Irregardless lost or found you keep your heart inside ~ An empty car room for two with you behind the wheel At breakneck speed reverse ... uh uh no brakes you'll have to squeal ~ The tunnel entrance coming fast the track throws in some curves Loop de loop jump a gorge flashing faces make you swerve ~ Scraping pillars passing through its' gate your triumphant cry This tunnel of love a magic world all pleasures intensified ~ You look around this awesome realm your eyes float free with tears The waves crash forth upon your cheeks as reality pokes and jeers ~ Your all alone you forgot to zig when zagging flashing faces You forgot to choose you snooze you lose Now ejected with the lonely cases ~ Cry a while in line again this time steer much smarter Buckle up and set your jaw this time ... Try ... to grab a partner ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes a wrong turn can lead us in the right direction...enjoyed the ride of this poem. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
2 Thumbs up  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Rex! I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Wheeeeeeeee ! A thrill a minute ! Loved it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem there Rex Jeffrey |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a unique approach, Rex. I enjoyed the ride... ~ Claire |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, Rex--down right inspirational--love to you...great job, as always, I did so enjoy... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thankyou everyone ... glad you enjoyed the ride ... you can take it any time ... it's free ... and Marge ... try not to have so much fun |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
YEP YEP YEP YEP YEP YEP Hey - Stop this train - I wanna get on...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Set your jaw...good line there. I've fallen and I can't get up  Na, you've done a great job here. Sounds like an intense ride with all the zigging and the zagging <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind, Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, "What Would Jesus Do?" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hilarious ride, Rex! Corinne |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Loved this ride! Marie~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thanks everyone for all your kind replies so happy to have made you smile |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Oooh, so clever...ly ridden. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
pen of passion ... LOL ... cool reply |
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