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sweetchild
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since 2000-04-19
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0 posted 2000-04-23 02:03 PM


Is it better to go through a blissful blindness, or to suffer the pain of knowing the truth?

There are some things childeren should not know
Some things childeren should not see
Things they shouldn't have to go through;
Things that would make them worry.

Don't let them loose their innocence
They can still see the world through blind eyes
What a gift it must be;
Not to realize.

There are some things none of us should know
Some things we should not see
Things none of us deserve to endure;
Why did it happen to me?



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-23 03:08 PM


SweetChild~
The truth, be it known, is not
always blissful either.

Hon, e-mail me if you need or want to talk.
I'm a pretty good listener.
I send you *HUGS*
Love ~*Marge*~


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hsystems
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since 2000-03-28
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2 posted 2000-04-23 03:38 PM


sweetchild, what a touching poem - it really struck a chord in me!  Please know that you are not alone - there are many survivors, here, and we all try to help one another through.  Excellent work - thank you for having the courage to post it!


Troy

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ESP
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3 posted 2000-04-23 04:44 PM


I am so very sorry you had to go through such pain...this beautiful poem expresses the tradgedy of this indescribably. Be strong...the world and your life can yet be beautiful again.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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