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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Gifts Sunny days and tranquil nights, Walks in the woods or by the sea. A hug from a friend, laughing out loud, Life's gifts are in simplicity. They may not be gaily wrapped; To be sure at time they may seem plain. Their beauty is in how they fill our hearts, As lakes are filled with rain. Next time your soul grows wings, Next time your entire being sings; Know that you've been blessed freely, With life's gifts of such pure simplicity! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Nicely done. I like your rhymes much. You are a happy person, it seems. Keep at this. Your first line reminded me of something I wrote a way's back: The days I hate pass quickly enough for the days I love, to drift by... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ESP, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Actually, I think I jumbled up the words there; maybe later...sorry! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A wonderful poem this Easter morning Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ESP~ Just lovely thoughts. Enough to brighten up an already beautiful day. Thank you for sharing from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for the replies everybody....this is the first time I have ventured into the corner pub for more than 2 minutes...its always kind of daunted me before. Thank you for your kind replies...much appreciated. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
ESP - beautiful sentiments, well-expressed. Keep up the good work!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Lizzie! Denise |
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