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WhtDove
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0 posted 2000-04-23 01:32 AM


The ultimate sacrifice I can think of
Is what they did to our Savior, Jesus
How they split his skin with whips
As He stood and endured the pain
All for His children, children like you
To save us all from ourselves.

Who carried the burden of the cross
Our crosses, our burdens, our sins
All because the love He holds for each
He endured it when they spit into His face
And pushed Him to the ground, and blasphemed His name
Believing not that He was sent from God.

He endured each heart-rending nail
That pierced into his wrists
And tore into the feet of peace
Thorns that were sunk deep into the head
Of one who endured because of love.

One who was placed upon a cross
And hung until his very bones
Were out of their joints
And the lungs caved in
And He endured suffocation.

But even though he hung there,
He still had the strength to teach
And say, God forgive them
For they know not what they do.

But He is an overcomer, for He has RISEN!





[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 04-23-2000).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-04-23 01:35 AM


this was so beautiful, maybe I'll go to church tomorrow after all!!!

 Kathleen


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2 posted 2000-04-23 01:37 AM


Yes....beautifully done, Becky....
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3 posted 2000-04-23 01:38 AM


Oh, WhiteDove~
How vividly true.
How blessed is the rememberance
of what He gave for us.

God the Father we thank you.
Jesus, King of Kings we thank you.
He is risen !
Glory be His name.
~*Marge*~



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WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-04-23 02:17 AM


I changed the title for those whom might be upset by it.

Irish, Devine and Marge God bless you all and thank you much!

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-04-23 10:55 AM


Another Beautiful poem Angel... you go girl!!


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Pepper
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6 posted 2000-04-23 11:37 AM


A beautiful poem, Dove ....

brandondinsmore
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7 posted 2000-04-23 11:50 AM


Nice, and well thought out.  I am not a Jesus follower, but I can understand your feelings in this one.  Good job.
WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-04-23 01:00 PM


DA, Pepper thank you! God bless!

Brandon then that is a compliment indeed! Thank you!

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9 posted 2000-04-23 02:43 PM


Such a beautiful description of the greatest Easter gift of all! Happy Easter!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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10 posted 2000-04-23 02:48 PM


I wouldn't expect any less of you.....and you never disappoint. Wonderful work, dovey.
Denise
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11 posted 2000-04-23 03:12 PM


Amen! This says it all, Rebecca!

Denise

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-04-23 03:41 PM


Beautiful WhtDove...Yes it was the Ultimate Sacrifice...it took all of his strength and all of his courage and all of his love and of course total trust in his Heavenly Father to pay this price for all of us...I do Love him and all my hope is with him.   James
WhtDove
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13 posted 2000-04-23 09:55 PM


Love Bug Happy Easter to you too!

Thanks much Balladeer! I'm sure I disappoint, but thank you for such a wonderful comment!

Thank you Denise, I hope so!

James it sure did! If only we could be so dependant. I'm glad to hear your trust is with Him, no better place to put it!

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14 posted 2000-04-23 11:05 PM


Oh, incredible work, Whtdove.  God Bless you.  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

WhtDove
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15 posted 2000-04-24 12:00 PM


Bowing my head in thanks Krista! God bless you too sweetie!
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16 posted 2000-04-24 02:35 AM


(sniff) yuh i love HIM
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