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Brandyn Sand
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 82
Columbia, SC

0 posted 2000-04-22 08:13 PM


If you believe dreams can come true
And strength, in the end, prevails,
That honor and loyalty still exist
And pure love will never fail;
If you're strong enough to fight your way
Through a parched and arid land,
But are searching for a similar soul
To support and hold your hand;
Your journey may have reached its end
And your search may now be through,
For you just may have found the one
Who's been waiting a lifetime for you.

© Brandyn Sand 10/98




 

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2000-04-22 08:17 PM


Welcome to Passions, this certainly is a very beautiful poem, hope to see more of yours here.
mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind
2 posted 2000-04-22 08:26 PM


This was very Passionate!
Welcome!  What a nice intro...

Marie~


netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
3 posted 2000-04-22 08:29 PM


Hi Brandyn, Welcome to Passions.
This is heartfelt and lovely.

Thanks for sharing,
netswan

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
4 posted 2000-04-22 08:30 PM


Hello Brandyn....
This is simply beautiful.
What a way to introduce yourself to Passions!
Welcome  

~Sheri

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-22 09:19 PM


what a beautiful calling card and welcome to the forum. You have a well of offering and this is a wonderful beginning!

 Kathleen


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2000-04-22 09:33 PM


Welcome to passions, I am very impressed with your first post.  Brandyn, this is a very poignant piece.  The last two lines are beautiful to me "for you just may have found the one, who's been waiting a lifetime for you," what a way to end an already wise poem!  
Do share more of your poetry with us!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2000-04-22 10:52 PM


Brandyn~
Not only was I impressed with this first post of yours ... I was entranced by your homepage.  I will go back and read some more of your lovely poetry.

Welcome to Passion's.
Glad to have you here.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
8 posted 2000-04-22 11:08 PM


Brandyn,
       welcome to Passions!!  This is a wonderful poem!  

I too, love the last two lines, "For you just may have found the one
Who's been waiting a lifetime for you."

Simply romantic!!  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Denise
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Posts 22648

9 posted 2000-04-22 11:28 PM


Welcome to Passions, Brandyn! This is lovely! Please check your email for a special welcome! I look forward to reading more of your work!

Denise

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