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Slashed soul
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0 posted 2000-04-22 10:43 AM


Alone in my popularity,
distant in my screams,
life seemed simple, a kids dream.

Sunny day, kites fly high,
smell of grass,
emerald sky,
Scan horizon,
clouds of rain,
anvil nimbus,
foundry of pain.

I won't run,
I can't hide,
Storm I see, rages inside.
Thunder groans, lightning hits the spot,
nerves electrified, forget it not.

Blitzkrieg on life,
Knocked me to the wet grass,
cold, tired, my hell has passed.
Look again, horizon blue,
angelic clouds,
cotton faces of you.

-Rich-

(for Serenity  )

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1 posted 2000-04-22 11:44 AM


Rich~
This is lovely and she will love it.
What a nice poetic gesture.
That's what friends are for !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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since 2000-02-19
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2 posted 2000-04-22 01:57 PM


Rich-

This was so beautiful!! I am sure your friend will truly enjoy this. Keep up the excellent writing...i'll keep reading. Take care. Truly enjoyed this.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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