»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Icarus
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Icarus |
|
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
|
Icarus So sweet, the honor of knowing you, sleeping angel. Deeper still, you pointed the way, sweeping slight of hand. Reach, stretched taut, Assignment On High, spread by a lullaby. Lay, lay down with you, Oh yes, the featherbed feel of you. Light is lingering, past sun’s waxing set, a song, is it you? © 2000 Corinne |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Corinne, this is an excellent poem. I love the story of Icarus - but this is golden. Michael |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not just a smile sweetly, Corinne...much substance here as well! Beautifully done! |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you so much, Michael and Serenity. Written for a fading star. Corinne |
||
|
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this is a really sweet poem, but what star could be fading in your sky, sweet poet.? Parker |
||
|
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully done. |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Beautifully said dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Parker, a time to live, a time to die. Thank you Marge and Mike. Corinne |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Good thoughts, good words, fine poem. *L* |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very, very nicely done, Corinne.....a favorite story of mine |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching, Corinne. Lovely. Denise |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
More good stuff - a la Corinne...  |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, Seymour, Balladeer, Denise and Nan! Corinne |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
