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You Gazed Into My Eyes Tonight (repost )
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You Gazed Into My Eyes Tonight (repost ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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You gazed into my eyes tonight I spied a glimmer of delight A smile filled with heaven’s grace So swiftly spread across your face Alone we were, just you and me Enraptured in sweet reverie These times of ponder are the best By far more special than the rest I gazed into your eyes tonight You filled my soul with sheer delight You touched my hand and then my face A moment safe from time’s erase Those eyes that will a future see Long after I shall cease to be Tonight have told me I am blessed They’ll not forsake me when I rest They’ll carry me long past this night Remembering long gone delight Recalling well this time and place When we were touched by heaven’s grace And through your eyes I too will see Those future days still yet to be Long after I am laid to rest You’ll sing for me that we were blessed. 01/10/2000 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Loved it the first time around Denise and still do! So sweet it is  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you for this repost, Denise...truly beautiful, dreamy quality...hugs to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Rebecca and Serenity for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I wrote this one for Christian also after a night of babysitting! He is a sweetie! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i'm glad i didn't miss this this time round! ")  [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This was very touching~ Marie~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
very beautiful - full of hope, too! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Kaile, Marie and Corinne, so glad that you enjoyed this! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh my, brings out the romantic in me, come to think of it, that's not hard! But it is beautiful!!! Kathleen |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Denise this is simply romantic and very well written. I am glad you did this repost netswan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Kathleen, and Netswan, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Elegant and touching....straight from a heart that knows love. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ What a beautiful poem. Your heart is shining with love for this child. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
As this is a first read of this for me ...I enjoyed it alot....I am very touched at the way this was written.....very touched A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A beautiful piece! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Butterflies, Marge, David and EagleOne for reading and for your lovely replies! I'm glad it touched you! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Denise, include me among the ranks of those who think your a wonderful writer! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for reading and for your lovely reply, Danny! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, Your words are so filled with love my friend, your family is blessed to have you and so are we, Cerenity |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
One of the sweetest poems to ever grace this forum. I love it - and you Liz |
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