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Mischief Turns Into Passion
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Mischief Turns Into Passion |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Mischief Turns Into Passion Mischief in my thought’s I wander in on you, you catch sight of me but continue on your already set motions. My mischief running deep I continue my assault. With no words of any discouragement your demeanor slightly softens letting me enter closer to you. Playing games of truth or dare turns into loosely committed desires. Now the transformation begins into lovers realm. Energies mount brining two souls together intertwining, colliding, rhythmically turning two into one. Lustfully charge emotions bursting into inseparable furry, and finally the release of exaltations. Still intertwined rhythmically declining into a soft tranquil slumberous state , once again sharing soften touches of desire, this is all that remains of a fleeting moment of mischief, this feeling of fulfillment. By, Cerenity |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cerenity, Wow! That was a powerful piece of work. I like the strength of this one. It catches you and holds you until you the very end. BRAVO!!!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* wow..this is sensual and lovely to read C, a delight...you do mischief divinely *smile* perfect work here. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"fleeting moment of mischief". Nice selection of wording in this piece. Well done! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi to you very special friends, This is my first attemp at the lovey dovey thing, I have a hard time writting about this kind of stuff, but I always feel like I write to much heavey stuff and so here it is and you give me hope, thank you so much for your kind words. Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, mischief has almost always led me to passion! This is a wonderful poem and you should definitely write more of this "lovey-dovey" stuff. . . Excellent! ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You can say that again. |
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