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Empty Ache of You
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Empty Ache of You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A simple thread of lace, untwined. A grace upon th'bed. Arms ache--you're mine-- o then make me beg to breathe your breath sublime. My lover's legs sighs in sigh--- surrender soul instead. Lips love soft lies. They lick regret of love unrealized... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh lord,...*SIGH* *SIGH* *SIGH* ya got me with this one sweet serenity... oh man,...now I know you've been peeking in my heart's windows... seems me sweet twin and I woke up feeling the same sighs(way) (smile) this is exquisite my girl...breathtaking and I relate all the way to my surrending soul. thank you for the *SIGH*. me loves ya, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
How sensual...the alliteration certainly adds to the "feel" of this lovely piece of writing, Serenity. So nice! "Lips love soft lies." ~ exquisite... ~ Claire |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi serenity, This is beautiful my dear, very much enjoyed. Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I find this very sad written like you could use a hug and an ear perhaps I'm wrong Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
*sigh* You have a very tantalyzing style, serenity, even on the melancholy pieces. This is exquisite... Michael |
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