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desperado
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since 1999-05-24
Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2000-06-09 05:00 AM



wait
juat a moment in time
freeze
the movie in your mind
put aside the whispers
filter out the doubt
look into my eyes
ignore the muted shout
don't you wish to melt away?
into the golden sun?
don't you want to wisk away,
and have a little fun?
aren't you sick of pain
and fear inside your life
all I know inside of me
I want you as my wife
I'm tired of the race
I'm ill with blank disgrace
I want the world to leave us be
I want the world to set us free
take my hand and smile
you can let those tears fall
I'll make it worth your while
and always give it all
through good and bad I'll love you
through think and thin I'll stay
from the blinking of the sun
to the fading of the day
and in the night I'll hold you
until the sun appears
I'll take away your sorrows,
and cat away your fears
so let our love combine us
and let our spirits soar
just take my hand within you
and I'll love you evermore...


 "There were times in my life
when I was going insane
tryin to walk through
the pain
when I lost my grip
and I hit the floor
yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing"

© Copyright 2000 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27
Posts 222
IL, USA
1 posted 2000-06-09 05:10 AM


What a wonderful expression of your love.  I hope that the world leaves you alone and you are able to have this love in your life thank you for sharing your poem with us.  I look forward to reading more.
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-06-09 05:15 AM


*sigh* Just Beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2000-06-09 07:16 AM


Watch out, des... Your romantic side is taking over.... Lucky lady you've got there, my friend..
Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2001-03-21 07:17 PM


Just wanted this for my library, it's so beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
5 posted 2001-03-21 08:41 PM


*gives a this just totally makes me melt sigh* smootches to you jw

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2001-03-21 11:25 PM


Hi Desperado,

Simply beautiful a keeper for sure,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2001-08-15 05:03 AM


Just looking through my library and this gem appeared. Desperado, this is so beautiful, I had to make another comment on it.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

desperado
Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx
8 posted 2002-01-06 05:40 PM


you know Ive gotten replies andemails about this one and I just have to say thanks to all out there who read it and saved it.  it means alot to me.
james

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
9 posted 2002-07-07 03:55 AM


looking for missing poets.
I hope you and yours are well tonight, Des.

Enjoyed the power in this one.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2003-01-04 02:24 PM


just beautiful!
Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
11 posted 2008-02-23 08:31 AM


I hope no one minds me bumping up a few of my favourites

D

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