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Open Poetry #7
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Rhavin
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since 2000-05-27
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0 posted 2000-06-09 12:15 PM


As I gazed into your eyes
I saw the storm of hurt
To scared to tell me, so you lied
But that was worse

To blind or to scared
I ignored your pain
Your heart started to tear
And my mind went insane

I couldn't understand
Nor did I try
I thought it was something you planned
But I still don't know why

It has taken a long time
Mostly crying, and cursing you
But now I see the light
I just wish you knew

The pain is nearly gone
And I want you to know
That what I did was wrong
And the tears I cried for you left me soaked


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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-06-09 12:29 PM


this is a very thought provoking piece and i feel what you are saying well...enjoyed
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