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Sven
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0 posted 2000-04-20 11:52 PM


Singing softly since sunset
One other only opens
Never needing now nurturing
Glowing, growing, giving grace

Over ocean ochre obsession
Finding, feeling, flying, filling

Making mosaics, moving mountains
Yin yearning, yang yielding

Love like lavish leaves
In ideal iambic illumination
Familiar fervent fate fawning
Ever earnest earthly Eden

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-04-21 12:10 PM


"yin yearning, yang yielding..."

ah...a man of understanding here...(as if I ever had doubt...)

Lovely Sven...thank you for this.

devina
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2 posted 2000-04-21 12:26 PM


Yep, sis got my favorite line too! This says is all Sven dear!!! Lovely song...I can hear it now!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Sven
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3 posted 2000-04-21 07:12 PM


serenity, you're embarassing me. . .

Devina, thank you. . .can't you hear it though?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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