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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Unreached Love Laura M. Wells You are my unreached love that I can see; you make this friendship so difficult for me I do not understand the games you play, is it that you are scared to tell me you feel the same way? When I am with you I feel like I have the world in my hands but then you leave and everything turns back into sand You say that you have things to care of and I know that you do but oh how I would love to spend a few minutes with you You are so funny, witty, and smart and yes you also have one big heart I wish that you would feel the same way about me, I hate this waiting game you see We've known each other for almost a year and I hope that we grow closer for the next ones to come I love the way you make me laugh and smile it makes seeing you all worth while I know that lovers we may never be but just being your friend makes me filled with glee You are my unreached love but my soul I do send on the wings of a dove [This message has been edited by ParisGrl (edited 06-06-2000).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice work.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~pg very nice m'friend! i am really becoming a fan of your work this one is heartfelt and very touching. take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My goodness, I have no idea how this one slipped thru my reading the other nite. Anyhow, back to the top you go as this poem is truly sweet and deserving of another read.  Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Miss Paris..."You say you have things to take care of and I know that you do...but oh how I would love to spend a few minutes with you." This reminds me of a poem I wrote for lovely Lena. We all have priorities in our lives and sometimes we have to wait and be patient before our time comes and we will be more important in someones life we care for. This is true with me and Lena. The poem was titled "A little time". James |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
nice poem full of feelings....I donot understand what my love feels at times..but when I start questioning I end up in melancholy..better wait until the time is ripe for both..but no assurance given makes the quest painful and anything can happen. Sincerely A_L |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Oh Paris, I hope you are able to reach it. When you do, grab on tight and don't let go. Good job. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ahemm bump!  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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