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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-06-06 02:47 PM


I work at night
She works by day
The bed lays heart broken
We brush by once
And share a kiss
“I Love You’s” quickly spoken

The bed is like a locket
She has but half the heart
The one that I am missing
When we must be apart

When I lay for sleep through the day
Yes, I have more room to sprawl
My legs still hang from the sides
And my head bangs off the wall

So often while fitful napping
The phone rings so I awake
I answer as if I’m at work
And her giggles I cannot take

I let go of the pillow
Drink in the sound of her voice
She’s found time to talk to me
I tell her how I rejoice

And when she says that she must go
I exhale with such a force
I say goodbye breathlessly
So the butterflies run their course

Fitful sleeping begets dreaming
I dream soon a time that when
The moon will shine on both of us
One soul will share this bed again



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-06-2000).]

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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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1 posted 2000-06-06 02:50 PM


Whoo, best be getting a day job, Walt!

Lovingly told, you keep getting better and better.

Corinne

Corazon
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2 posted 2000-06-06 04:23 PM


will ditto corine on this one...great picture you painted
Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-06-06 04:39 PM


Dangit, Walt!! I TOLD you not to give up your day job!
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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Washington
4 posted 2000-06-06 05:19 PM


Ah Walt, this is adorable and sad and
funny --)   But, it does keep you
appreciating each other "absense does
make the heart grow fonder"

~netswan

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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5 posted 2000-06-06 05:25 PM


Hi Way
That was a nice poem about parting and uniting.

Sincerely
A_L

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2000-06-06 10:27 PM


thank yuh'll i was just misin the misses today but then she came home..kidding!!
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-06-06 10:36 PM


Beautiful thoughts!  I love your mix of humour in amongst your longing ... had me sighing and laughing in the same breath ... nicely penned Walt!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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