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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-05 09:46 PM




Diminutive Tessellations
~*Marge Tindal*~


Tiny shards of me
artfully arranged
by your hand
Making the sum
of me complete
in the mosaic of your mind
Diminutive tessellation's of me
Perceptions of the heart
At least in your eyes
Master sculptor
thou art






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-06-05 09:56 PM


Marge, if I had the opportunity to put your pieces together, I could never do a better job than He did. I wouldn't change a shard! You're a wonderful person and a gifted writer. This is terrific  
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2 posted 2000-06-05 10:06 PM


The Sculpter made beauty and her name was Marge...This poem is just so right and wonderful!
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3 posted 2000-06-05 10:40 PM


Absolutely gorgeous Marge..just like you.  A lovely person equals lovely poetry indeed.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~



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4 posted 2000-06-06 06:10 AM


Balladeer~
You always have the right thing to say ...
at the right time.  Many thanks, my friend.

Martie~
You know how my heart hugs you.

Krista~
I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the kind comments.
~*Marge*~



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5 posted 2000-06-06 06:46 AM


You are a perfect work of art, Marge!! You just couldn't be put together better!! Lovely poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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6 posted 2000-06-06 06:54 AM


Loved the words, loved the form, loved the theme ... love you Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-06-07 02:20 AM


Lil' Lizzie~
Well .... a little tweak here and there wouldn't hurt !  
Thank you, my wonderful friend.

Kit~
Loved your reply.
Love you too, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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