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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
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0 posted 2000-06-03 08:15 AM


Today,
I watched a young man
take a wrong turn.
I observed as he
dug his hole
and crawled deep inside it.

I
who held out my hand
and tried to guide him
saw him lie
and cheat
and get away with it.

He
learned a sad
but true lesson,
in a world
where principles are
too great a burden to bear.

Heroes
take drugs,
beat their wives,
kill and go free
he just cheated
on a test...just...cheated.

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-03 08:38 AM


Very thought-provoking Jana.  One does not get far in this life by cheating ... temporary break maybe, but it will always come back to haunt them in one form or another ... good thoughts here.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-06-03 05:43 PM


Jana~
An interesting poem.
Our conduct in our daily lives
draw lines that parallel our future ...

My grandmother used to sum it up thusly -
'When you cheat ... you only cheat yourself.
Then it becomes a habit you cannot break.'

Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-06-04 06:04 AM


Hero's are someone special that can be looked up to as a good example.  
Wonderful message...it all starts with the small things and grows from there.   James

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
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Callington, Cornwall, England
4 posted 2000-06-04 09:54 AM


A very poignant reminder to us all Jana. Keep up the good work  

Eric.

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