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Confused (please at least read this)
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Confused (please at least read this) |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
This poem was made by a friend of mine, she doesn't know i'm doing this, but I just wanted to know what you guys think about it... Confused I don't know what's going on... I don't feel anything... The love is ending... Why? Why did it happen? Everything is changing... I don't know if I want it... I don't know what I want... What will I do? I'm confused... I'm always confused... I don't know what's going on... I'm feeling something... I've just arrived and I saw the love... I thought that I was not in love... But when I see... I don't know what happens... I don't know what to do... What will I do? I'm confused... I'm always confused... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Sneaky little you  Your friend has captured the fight between heart and mind. I can relate to the battle and the words she has woven. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
thanks for reading this poem, but what's really tossing my brain is a little question.. is the person she talks about in the poem me? |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
One way to find out - write her a poem asking her. You're creative, I know you can do it! Please let us know how it turns out! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Lori... I don't think there is a better idea than this one... thanks |
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