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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2000-05-30 08:28 PM


I can go for days
in a daze and a funk
not knowing
what’s got me all wound up
and then a bright light,
called clarity,
clicks on in my head
and everything
seems perfectly
crystal clear
instead.


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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-05-30 08:35 PM


Jana, these verses ring true
Sometimes its shady lenses worn over here!
Tis a very good reading thanks for sharing
Coco

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-05-30 09:23 PM


Very nice Jana ... I call that bright light ... 'Friday'

seriously though ... I do relate to this every so often

Rex

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