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~ Heart's Sanctuary~
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~ Heart's Sanctuary~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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In dream, I sit envisioning your face- A plight of distant lovers in gentle cascade, Lovely tendrils of warmth begin to form, Where the key to my soul lies heavily worn… Silent grating of heartbeat, nearing a faint- I grasp for my balance, blessing the saint, When upon despair, thy form accumulates- Devouring my tears of silent heartache… Nearing my fall- I disillusion myself- Believing in heart, as does everyone else, Truth lies only within your soft wake- I give in to caress for my own body’s sake… Forever, adorned with a hint of love’s spice- I bleed unto your kisses, at the roll of Fate’s dice, Speaking softly, the whispers of a Moon Fairy- I find tender touches within your heart’s sanctuary. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Absolutely amaaaaaaaaaaazing! Devina, it's always a treat to come across your poetry.  Coco |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, this was so sweet, and in a whisper to me it was. Well maybe not me, but you could whisper it to me, come very close... yes within touching distance.... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi devina, This was absolutly wonderful my dear, I very much enjoy your writting. Love, Cerenity |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woowoo this be good stuff warm to the core like it lots devina |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is as beautiful as you are!! wow! nice flow and very romantic "I bleed into your kisses" ummmmm Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful writing Devina! I really like this one. Anything ( or one ) you want to tell us about??? Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
CocoBaci- thank you sweets...it's always nice to hear your replies as well!!!  James- Hush and feel my breath across your ear darlin...he he...TY sweet man... Cerenity- I'm glad you enjoyed...thought it was time for a happy one!! Walt- glad to be the warmer..ROFL...I mean glad you liked dearie... Irish Rose- You are definantly making me blush sweetheart...My deepest thanks!!! Marina- I'll spill it in an email...hope you approve!!LOL Look for it soon dear... Knew I couldn't keep anything a secret from you!!! he heOpen arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* This is beautiful Devina. . . just really good. . . it's nice to find that home isn't it? Hope that it works out. . . Wonderful poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ And you chided ME about romanticism ??? This is beautifully YOU ! Hmmmmmm ! Waiting for the mailman, young lady ! Love ya' .. ~*Other Mom*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Beautifully written. You have shared a romatic dream with us. Enjoyed the read. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven-I'm wishing the same for ALL my close friends!! And you sir, will always be on the top of that list...love ya hun!!!Marge- I know, I'm bad too...But I couldn't let this one go... And I'm sure the mailman already visited your box sweetie!!! Love you!!!Alle'cram- I'm glad you seen it that way too...TY Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Love the etherial feel to this, Devina! Lovely! Corinne |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Breath taking Miss Devina! You have such a way of expressing your feelings. I enjoyed read your work, as always. Best wishes to you and your new found sanctuary! ~Sheri |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
In dream, I sit envisioning your face- A plight of distant lovers in gentle cascade, Lovely tendrils of warmth begin to form, Where the key to my soul lies heavily worn… I especially loved the first verse, overall a beautiful poem. wonderful and sweet like love I guess. ------------------------ "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside Need a new start and a different time Something grows in the space between me And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweet sister mine, you ARE sanctuary of the heart....this was beautiful and deep...love to you....and hugs across the miles... |
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