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Laura56
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since 2000-05-28
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0 posted 2000-05-29 09:00 PM



WHY?

After all the times you hurt me,
The times you made me cry..
Why do I forgive you
with every little sigh?
The times you betrayed me,
and the times of painful good-byes...
Why do I still need you,
after all those lies?
The times that you ignored me,
and the times my pain has shown...
Why do I still care for you,
though you left me all alone?
With the scars you left upon me,
and the tears that fall each day..
Why am I still in love with you
Though you've treated me this way?


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-05-29 09:04 PM


Not sure anyone can answer this age old question....nice poem.  
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2 posted 2000-05-29 09:56 PM


Laura~
Welcome to Passion's.
I enjoyed your poem
and especially this line -

'Why do I forgive you
with every little sigh?'

The heart gives until it
can't give anymore ...
then, it forgives.

~*Marge*~




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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2000-06-06 06:49 PM


Nice writing..I have been in similar situations and still felt love.  Love can last a long time and endure quite a bit.  James
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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4 posted 2000-06-06 06:59 PM


HI Laura56
I understand those bad times but if we can sustain love and understand it's twist and turns and be patient with it I think it can proceed. Above all its sheer bliss if we can be with one whom we've loved all our life. I wish you the best let no one take you for granted.

Sincerely
A_L

Danny Holloway
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Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-06-08 09:51 AM


I've often wondered why women let themselves be abused mentally and physically by a man, and remains in the relationship knowing nothing is going to change.  Can anyone explain this to me???
Your poem is well written and expresses a situation that many women face.

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