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allan
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On the road

0 posted 2000-05-27 08:14 AM


He drew his sword
But was soon then dead.
My sword having
pierced his heart.
I saw his surprise
and the shock in his eyes.
And fleeting farewells
To whom
I know not.
A Mother, a Brother, a Father?
I saw him rise.
Blue wraith
to the skies.

And turned to my horse to ride.


[This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-27-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-05-27 09:09 AM


Ah, a knightly poem! Very good...  
allan
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On the road
2 posted 2000-05-27 09:50 AM


Yes. I know not from whence it came! (Quothe he quizzically...)(?!)    



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X Angel
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Oregon
3 posted 2000-05-27 10:53 AM


hehehe stuff like this must be in the air
I'd like to see more of this poem allan!
This was great!
~Heather

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