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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2000-05-25 07:06 PM


When peace eradicates death
you reach for the hand
knowing
the warmth
the grasp
of fingers
lets you know
that someone
somewhere
understands...

© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-05-25 07:13 PM


Extending a friendship hand here, Rainbow.
Corazon
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2 posted 2000-05-25 07:17 PM


extending two here...to give you a hug...nice poem rg....good to see you writing  
I gotta get...won't be back til tues...big hugs though

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-05-25 08:12 PM


RainbowGirl~
And another hand of understanding
reaches out to grasp yours ...
Peace, my friend ...
I love you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SpitFire
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4 posted 2000-05-25 08:15 PM


~It's like that silent look or the unspoken gentle touch that just lets you know that they understand and feel deeply for you.  Wonderfully expressed.  My hand I extend to you as well. *Take care.
Corinne
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5 posted 2000-05-25 08:18 PM


Lovely.

Corinne

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6 posted 2000-05-25 08:43 PM


You'll always get a great big hand from me, Rainbow.  
Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-05-25 09:07 PM


Extending both hands, and arms, for a warm hug...many thoughts winging your way, RG.
Nan
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8 posted 2000-05-26 07:04 AM


... and joining Passionate hands here, my dear friend... God Bless
Denise
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9 posted 2000-05-26 09:51 AM


You have many hands and arms here at Passions, Cindy, and tons of great big HUGS whenever you need them!

Denise

LngJhnAg
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10 posted 2000-05-26 11:31 AM


Hi there, lil Rainbow gal - a sweet poem - Incidently: ol' 'Deer's hand?  You gotta watch out where he will extend it, and where its already been!  lol
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-05-26 11:34 AM


Lovely and sweetly said RainbowGirl ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
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12 posted 2000-05-26 02:12 PM


When peace eradicates death
you reach for the hand
knowing
the warmth
the grasp
of fingers
lets you know
that someone
somewhere
understands...


beautiful, it is always comforting to know someone understands and appreciates and is willing to extent their hand to you.
fantastic poem, lovely.

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto



TerryW
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13 posted 2000-05-26 04:34 PM


Rainbow,
     I always stand with my hand outsrtetched.  If ever you need a little help in holding on, remember -- Your friends are here to help you.  You will always have the strength of our numbers.

Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Lorraine Nisbet
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14 posted 2000-05-26 07:00 PM



When peace eradicates death
I pray for the day.

~Lorraine

Pepper
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15 posted 2000-05-26 07:36 PM


Great Big HUSG , RG

Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 2000-05-26 08:03 PM


Rainbow
The holding of hands and extending of friendship is a universal language, which you express exquisitly in English.
Well done, dear friend
Liz

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