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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-05-25 06:55 PM


My Lady

I loveth thine hair,
and thine skin so fair.
I loveth thine eyes,
which tell no lies.
I loveth thine nose,
with it's shining tip,
and most of all,
I loveth thine lips,
for love is spoken there.
I loveth the wind,
which rustles thine hair,
and kisses thine lips.
I loveth the sun,
which peeks from clouds,
giving thee warmth,
and lighting thine day.
I loveth the trees,
that line the walk,
and whisper,
you've passed their way.
I loveth thine person,
from head to foot,
I loveth thine ways,
thine gaze,
and all at which thee look.
That I might touch that
which thee have,
that I might hold that,
which thee love,
that thy might see me,
in thine sleep,
that thy might love me,
just a week.
Oh lovely one,
of infinite grace,
can'st I gaze upon thy face,
without the fear of sharp respite,
as I confess my love,
each day,
and night.

W. James Beard, Jr.



[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-26-2000).]

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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-25 09:29 PM


James -- where do you find these love
poems? I seldom write one, someday, soon
I shall write one for fun, but no way
as tender as yours are

Lovely

~netswan

Sven
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2 posted 2000-05-25 11:15 PM


James,
      me thinks that perhaps the spirit of Shakespeare himself hath spoken to thee this night. . .

For thou hast penned a wonderfully romantic poem to thy love. . . well done I say sir. . . well done. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Temptress
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Mobile, AL
3 posted 2000-05-25 11:33 PM


WOW!  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-05-25 11:49 PM


I Loveth thy poem! AWESOME!!!!I Love Shakespearean  style poetry!!!!  

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-05-26 10:34 AM


Thanks for the words folks...this was a stab in the dark...I was watching Robin Hood and it just kinda evolved from there...
kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

6 posted 2000-05-26 10:41 AM


Wow! If this is a stab in the dark, I can only imagine what you come up with when it's not.  What a beautiful romantic poem!  

Kat

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-05-26 12:09 PM


If there be a fair maiden awaiting your tender advances James, thy words will surely dissolve all resistance ... beautifully written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
8 posted 2000-05-26 03:12 PM


James Thous was wonderful, bravo. beautiful.
You must have the fairest maiden in all the land.


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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
9 posted 2000-05-27 09:15 AM


"oh lovely one of infinite grace"! sigh!!!
How incredibly romantic. I love this poem. It flows like the lovers caress it is meant to be. Thanks James. Ellie< !signature-->

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jwesley
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Spring, Texas
10 posted 2000-08-19 11:12 PM


Reposted in open 9.

wjb


[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-19-2000).]

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