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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Soul Mates Through all of space and all of time. Our one true mate we try to find. When we feel we’ve found our one true mate. That’s when we are dealt, a twist of fate. We no longer feel that first love’s connection. Our souls have turned a new direction. Searching and hoping and wanting to find. A mate to share our body, soul, and mind. For when we find them, its such a wonderful feeling. It warms your soul, and sets your heart reeling. Now life is short, and so unpredictable. Should we pass up the chance, to make it happy and full? No I say, lets live for the moment. Lets forget the rules, and forsake the torment. For at last I have found you, and it has began. The wonderful connection between a woman and a man. Call it fate, karma or destiny. The one for me is you, and for you is me. So lets thank the stars for their intervention. Also destiny and fate for this strong connection. So lets share what we can, before its too late. Me with you my one true Soul Mate. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Dakota! Wonderful poem and written well. ~netswan |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing your work with us here. What a wonderful discription of soulmates. I look forward to reading more. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A warm Welcome to you Dakota  This is a great first post and I really enjoyed reading it. Loved your expression Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem, Dakota! Welcome to the Passions Family! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome aboard, Dakota... You've expressed some wonderful sentiments here.. Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
We are truly blessed when we find our soul mates ... nicely done Dakota, and welcome to Passions. Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
There is no union stronger then when soul mates come together. I have found mine and nothing compares to the feelings I feel for him and how he makes me feel. At the sametime nothing compares to the feelings when I can't be with him. I love your poem dakota and I hope I can see more from you on here.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi Dakota...very cool name add my welcome to the list. this is a cool poem...great word choices and rhyme... there is no feeling that compares to finding our heart's reflection in another... makes for some awesome inspiration as well take care , jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome! And a lovely poem it is too... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A truly wonderful poem Welcome to Passions. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Great first post...Welcome Dakota ~Lorraine |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
To be able to see into one's soul, and they seeing into yours is truly the best gift! And so, they shall be soul mates! Very nicely writen and Welcome to the Passions Family! ~Sheri |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dakota~ Welcome to the Passion's family. You will enjoy the friendships you make here. Enjoyed the lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great thoughts, Dakota. I hope this person is your true soul mate. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Thank you all for your kind words, I am enjoying being here immensly. Being amongst you all is very inspiring. Thank you again for this wonderful welcome! |
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mitymopr Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 14 |
that's all well and good, until they rip your heart out and step on it. Very well written though |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
There is no far greater connection than which can be made with our soulmate.....you are immensely lucky to know of the feeling it brings along !! Welcome to Passions, Dakota shilpi |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
I really loved your poem Dakota! I found it very descriptive of how most people view soulmates. Keep up the good work. |
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