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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sweet She resists with a plea So confused by her needs Does she take what she wants or Just smile at the thought The desire's so strong is the taking so wrong can she have what she has, and have what she wants the weakness overcomes and the taste is so yumm a satisfying treat, Oh, and the taste is so sweet. James Parker Haley © 20000 |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
She knows what she wants, Love to her heart to keep, She dreams sweet dreams in her sleep, Thoughts that dance to willows that weep, Into his heart she waits for a small peek, Within his poetry, she finds his soul there, Laid out and broken, bare, She cries for his pain, To be a heart complete, Into his words I am wrapped like a candy treat, Tis' ever delicious, poetry so sweet. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Parker---oh you know me now.....and if you don't that's as sweet a lie as I have heard for awhile...smiling.... Thank you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks she should have her cake and eat it too...(if shes really good)  delish little bite here from you parker-man... a sweet treat indeed... but then we would expect nothing less from you ... later sweet-parker-gator jm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hmmm, she muses. As in the apple from the forbidden tree, woman has succumbed, tempted by thee. Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh my, a man who understands women *g* you are a rare breed great poem  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
back to the top you go! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Romantic Heart, thank you for that wonderful reply it was very sweet. serenity, I have more sweet lies, I'll just whisper them. Janet, thank you as always, always putting me on a pedistal....lol Corinne, temptation by a sweet refrain.... I am tempted by the soul of the Tapestry A waif of the sea, pure and victual.... Corazon, I couldn't claim to understand them at all, they are a mystery that is sweet and elusive.... thank you for your comment. Parker |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh James ... if we could only have it "all" ... such sweetness it would be indeed ... wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kit, what you mean we can't, darn. Thanks for replying Parker |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sweetness follows, the weakness overcomes and the taste is so yumm a satisfying treat, Oh, and the taste is so sweet. love is the sweetest fruit of all. really good poem, enjoyed it alot. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
brian, thank you for the kind reply. It can be sinfully sweet at time too. Parker |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sweetness can be irresistible! Excellent poem! |
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