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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Your eyes have kissed the sky and there is noway Im going to hide from you this time. Open the book turn a page there in parchment a picture of you and I our smiles seeds planted in the earth, our hands are pressed together palms touching submission perhaps permission perhaps to be as one for once. I marvel at the feel of you against me light as snow on my lashes, you lay on my eyes and tell me all the world. The book closes, but there you are for real strolling in the middle distance, and I love the way you move. I reach out across time space and find the place where I can stand beside you. I run your hair through my hands it glides like woven strands, and you are falling sunlight on me. I'll never hold you forever, and its ok if I dont think about it too much as the dusk demands the day away, I'll take the time I have you and thank each word we share, each smile we give, and you know I love you dont you. You start to exit my sight, but I cannot complain you touched me and Im never going to be the same. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fool~ These are beautiful thoughts ! 'our hands are pressed together palms touching submission perhaps permission perhaps to be as one for once.' Greatly enjoyed the movement of your words. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorites here. I am going to keep this one. You have done remarkable here. Your words ring so true for my life too. Thanks! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Fool,...I actually feel a bit strange addressing you that way, but this is so beautifully written. I am glad that I found it here as it is a treasure. *Take care. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is was so beautiful and gentle, loved it!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
I'd put a smiley face on here but its against my religion lol. Thankyou all for your comments. fool. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You reached inside of me and touched a hidden place in my heart.WOW!!! So beautiful, to say the least. -SEA |
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