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Forever LovingYou |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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There’s something in your gentle smile That thrills my very soul- I want to take you in my arms, Protect you from the cold. There’s something in your eyes, my love That warms through and through. And makes me long to spend my time Forever loving you. Although the mountains crumble- And the stars no longer shine. My world would keep on turning- Just knowing that you’re mine. The birds all sing more sweetly- Colors have a brighter hue… While we walk close together- Forever loving you. Visit My Home Page http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/Traveler.html |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aaahh...this rings so sweetly sir. My favorite stanza was the 3rd I believe. The whole thing was breathtaking and sincere though. Bravo! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Gunslinger, really a great poem about the one you love. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely and warm...I enjoyed the way you fit in Forever loving you. A smooth and enjoyable read. James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slinger~ I like it when 'the traveler' takes a moment to pause by his heart and send these beautiful thoughts my way. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Gunslinger, This is beautiful I love the flow of it, thanks for sharing. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a sweet, beautiful love song! Denise |
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