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Tess
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0 posted 2000-04-19 11:11 AM



Our Love

In my mind I know the words,
In my heart I feel the warmth,
In my soul I sense the touch,
Of our love.

Time apart is so hard to bear,
Wish you were here, Wish I were there,
But in our hearts I know we share,
Our love.

I think of you at day's first light,
I dream of you all through the night,
I whisper to you as I hold you tight,
It's you I love.


 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



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Richter_9
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1 posted 2000-04-19 11:12 AM


I can relate to being apart from the one you love.  This is beautiful, Tess.


Rich

Tess
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2 posted 2000-04-19 01:05 PM


Thanks Rich  
mariee66
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3 posted 2000-04-19 01:12 PM


This is beautiful, Tess~
Marie~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-04-20 05:47 AM


"I whisper to you as I hold you tight...its you I love"....I really enjoyed reading this poem about love.   James
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5 posted 2000-04-20 07:28 AM


Tess~
Very, very pretty.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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