Another 1 about falling for someone online..

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Open Poetry #7

Another 1 about falling for someone online..

Holly
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 127
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-05-16 06:25 PM

-WORDS-

your words float across my screen,
making you real or so it seems
the sweetness, laughs, smiles, & of course
the love you give to me is something I can feel,
even though I can't see

you have given my life depth, my soul a mate,
I still don't understand why, unless it is truely fate
my worries from the day just float away, once I read those beautiful words you have to say

HLB 2000

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-05-16 06:58 PM

this one says a ton! it's so accurately portrayed.....so real....so true.

Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

2 posted 2000-05-16 07:03 PM

Holly, this is sweet.

netswan

Holly
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 127
Arkansas

3 posted 2000-05-17 05:20 AM

Thanks for the sweet words! I appreciate it you guys.

sincerely,
-Holly

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-05-17 05:35 AM

Lovely poem Holly ... I particularly liked your line "you have given my life depth, my soul a mate," ... sigh, nice work!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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