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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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- Don't Kiss Me Yet -  Walk with me for a little while, laugh with me - I love your smile. No kisses yet, I want much more I've lost a few like that before... Take my hand - let's run away, and find a way to spend the day. Whispering and having fun spread a quilt down in the sun... Tell me all that you aspire share with me, your heart's desire. I'll close my eyes & dream with you, and pray that all our dreams come true. Hold me there within your arms mesmerize me with your charms. Let's fall asleep, beneath a tree and daydream for eternity... Don't kiss me yet, I want much more To know your dreams, and watch you soar... I love the way you look in flight, the way your eyes light up so bright. The way you smile back at me the way you laugh so eagerly. Winds now blow so tenderly, there in the shade beneath the tree... A springtime rain begins to fall but we don't mind the rain at all... You jump up - take my hand so sweet we run out laughing, in bare feet. I love the way your hair looks wet, and still you haven't kissed me yet. Thunder, lightning, in the sky we're jumping puddles - do or die! Our clothes are soaked & we don't care I realize that I love your stare... The way your eyes look deep in me, I'm curious - just what you see... ~~~~~~~~~~ I see a man who walks, not crawls who laughs out loud each time he falls. Who holds my hand so gently so... and hesitates - to let it go. I like the way you stop and stare I like the way you touch my hair... You sweep it back so tenderly, behind my ear, so I can see. Your brush your hand across my cheek without a word, to me you speak... With your eyes & with your touch you tell me that I mean so much. To spend a day with you like this - I'd fall, even - - without your kiss... ~~~~~~~~~~ -poetFemmeFatale April 18, 2000 "Laugh and the world laughs with you..." cry, and you're all alone. My version - pFF |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
I was there in this one!! You have a way with words my dear..A very powrfull and beautiful way... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh my.....what a way to spend the day....and all within the bounds of want you need and want. If all could be shared like this....the kiss would be so much more...I liek this alot PFF  A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Uh, yeah, too late for me I know...LOL But hey, I'll vouch here, she means what she says... Patience may reap a reward far beyond that which words could describe. Beautiful words, Gen. Michael |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great poem....loved spending the day....waiting for the kiss |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damn, I wanna kiss ya now LOL this is beautiful Gen...full of your hearts longing... oh yes...patience is a virtue... very very nice work here my girl. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice writing. "with your eyes & with your touch". No denying the message there. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
Ah, but the temptation... A lovely poem Miss Femme. Rich |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Tears here. I absolutely loved this. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Compgirl - - Oh geesh - were you hiding in the trees? Did you see everything?  FirstKnight - - To me, this is how love is suppose to start out, and this indeed, would be the perfect date, other than being on the back of his bike all day, driving down the highway, wind in our hair! Aaaahhh....Although motorcycles make me uh....."handsy", so that probably wouldn't be a good idea. Never mind! Michael - - You grace me with your comments - Thank you. (blushing) Corazon - - No sense in jumping in feet first, if you do, then what can possible be left to share? No sweet anticipation..... Janet - - LOL Er....gosh....I never knew! Now I know why you invited me to play trucks! ROFLMAO You weren't interested in DANNY, it was ME you were after all along! heheheheheDanny - - Oh ye of much wisdom, I thank you! You've reminded me, there is still beauty in morality. Whew - thank you sir for all your words. BTW, I am your new competition when it comes to Janet, did you know that? LOL Richter 9 - - Do I laugh here, or smack you? LOL You kill me! You are soooo subtle! (ahem) I may be blonde, but it's only a chemical thing baby! hehe You really think I'm a moron, don't you? ROFLMAO You just wait.....This is fun.  Robert - - Why do you cry? Didn't mean to make you go and do that...I'm sorry! Love you bro! I promise, I'm gonna do that email thingy soon! hehe Is your mom and my dad still coming to visit you for Easter? Catch you soon! "Laugh and the world laughs with you..." cry, and you're all alone. My version - pFF |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
I've deffinitely been here before. It's how my ex and I spent the first 3 weeks of an eternity.... well.. obviously not an eternity, but it seemed like it... =) Anyways... we were just friends through so many eyes but I had fallen for her long before that first kiss ever came.... first kiss just set it in stone. =) Of course back then I waited because I was too shy  to make the first move. But I know what you mean, days like the one you're describing here are the best beginings. (Of course you do realize that according to my poem "A little kiss of passion" you're kissing already, right? Just not with your lips.) P.S. I promise I'm not ignoring your E-mails. I've sent at least 7 replies that you haven't received. Everyone else is getting their E-mail fine. And I'm getting yours.  Is prodigy having problems with me? ICQ? In all my rambling I almost forgot to comopliment you on your poem... it flows very well. I really like this one. [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh what a beautiful mkelody you have here Jeffrey |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I like the way your words flowwwwwwwww |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It would appear that you are beginning to see how you want it to happen. . . this is a wonderful poem. . . Nice to see something like this coming from you again. . . excellent work!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely imagery! Corinne |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of your best, Gen...lovely poem and such an image!!!  |
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