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-- Without You (The Pain Sets In) --
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL 
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Yeah yeah yeah... another depressing one, I know. -- Without You (The Pain Sets In) -- (5-15-2000) Without you, I'll be fine Rain still falls, sun still shines Tears will drop, and eyes will swell But I'm on my own, I wish you well I've bent, I've broken, I've mended again I'm no longer numb, and the pain sets in I'm always getting less, and always giving more I gave you my love, and you teased me with yours Dangled over my head, tied with pain from your past You were always my first, and I was always your last I guess I saw it coming, I must have closed my eyes But now they're wide open, and I see all the lies The proof's all here, the test results are in You're unworthy of my love, not even a friend I'm taking back my heart, you won't miss it at all It was that little piece of me, cold outside your walls I'm moving on without you, I'll learn to love again I'm moving on without you, and the pain sets in... --Dave < !signature--> "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, Dave this is great! So glad to read about hearts smart enough to mend again -) netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Without you, I'll be fine Rain still falls, sun still shines Tears will drop, and eyes will swell But I'm on my own, I wish you well I've bent, I've broken, I've mended again I'm no longer numb, and the pain sets in -------------------- The proof's all here, the test results are in You're unworthy of my love, not even a friend I'm taking back my heart, you won't miss it at all It was that little piece of me, cold outside your walls I'm moving on without you, I'll learn to love again I'm moving on without you, and the pain sets in... -------------------- "no more tears ... left to hide, we have made it thru a long and lonely nite, BETTER DAYS ... are on our sides... well, it looks as though we're doing something right. *melissa manchester* well my sweet poet-pal, I know where this comes from and I know its a real drag... but as much as it sucks... its is long over due... your right...she didnt deserve you... ya got any of that wine chilled? I wanna toast ya... to better days...to rising above... to finding someone who deserves your love. HEY...that rhymed ...I must be a poet.  did I mention the poem rocks... so does the poet *S* later-dave-gator jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dave~ A very powerful piece and I wish you well in life. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dave~ Sweetie, the reality of it is that there is so much hope and another heart waiting to be filled with your love. 'I'm moving on without you, I'll learn to love again' A *Hug* and a *Smile*. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Well hey... what'd'ya know... I wrote this one. =) I remember this poem... =) I forgot to say thank you to everyone for all your replies. This is actually a poem based on old feelings, but it's all I've got to write from right now. As of right now my life seems pretty empty and that's kind of hard to write about. So I'm writing about memories.... maybe I can try to remember a few good memories next time. =) Jan - I've got a little of that wine left.. maybe we can get together for some cyber-wine Love ya, Dave"Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dave, Oh I relate well too. Such sadness....I hope you have learned to love again. Tomorrow will be a better day, I promise!!  LW |
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